Comments : I want you with me

  • 13 years ago

    by luminous wonder

    Awww its like a sugar sweet coating to a pain dwelling within... I mean that in a way that the fear of losing someone so close to you embeds itself within the ties of hope and longing for things to remain the same... This is an inspiring poem and I hope all things worked out...
    Thanks for sharing this poem...
    Great work
    Keep it up :)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by karl fisher

    Thanks i appreciate it a lot :)

  • 13 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    BeaUTIFUL ND simple 5/5