I loved the way you wrote it...i love the flow of words you've used. i need to read poems like this everyday, no matter how simple it is it gives me encouragement to go on...i'm learning from you. EXCELLENT is the exact word for a comment!

Wow!!!!! a beautiful write! :)

Girl! This Reminds Me Of My Poetry! You Are A Great Writer.! I Love Love Love The Positive Emotions In This, Really What I Live For Is Optimism. I Honestly Cant Stand Reading Sad Poems, Its Not That I Dont Respect Them, Its Just I Dont See The Meaning, If You Get What Im Saying? Life Is About Smiling And Being Happy, And Will Bring Struggles. But Thats What Makes Us Stronger. Everything Happens For A Reason May Be A Relativly Old And Boring Quote That Everybody Seems To Tell You..But I Beleive It. So Just Remember That, And Live For Yourself.! Like You Portrayed In,

"Believe in yourself...
Believe you are true.
Don't let others tell you what to do
for it is your own heart that will lead you."

I LoveThat!, Its So Wonderfly True That Im Impressed By Your Writing!
Well, I Think I Said What I Intended To Say!
So Have A Wonderful Day, And Dont Stop Smiling! Beleive In Yourself!!
With Love Always-
Jessi<3

AMAZING and wow I loved it very wonderful and fantastic a great perspective on inner strength and life,,,terrific job I loved it a great read :) 5/5