by Matthew Schut Sep 29, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
My heart beats more every second |
by shayla
I love this poem :] |
by average thoughts
Wow..so cute, simple, beautiful, excellent piece..5+5.. |
Awwww this poem is so romantic and sweet! I loved it from the beginning until the end! |
by Meme
Sweet, amazing, awesome, spectacular, tender, charming, heart-felt, epic piece you have in here. |
by BlueJay
This is sweet. There is a ton of emotion, and strong emotion at that. The flow is perfect!! You start off so wonderfully and end so strong. Your voice is clear and precise. I really like this piece though it was not penned very originally, or so it seems. Other than that I give this a 5/5. |