This is sweet. There is a ton of emotion, and strong emotion at that. The flow is perfect!! You start off so wonderfully and end so strong. Your voice is clear and precise. I really like this piece though it was not penned very originally, or so it seems. Other than that I give this a 5/5.

Oh yes before I forget wonderful word choice.

Sweet, amazing, awesome, spectacular, tender, charming, heart-felt, epic piece you have in here.

There is something in the way it makes you feel after reading it. I miss writing love poems :( but your poem may start an inspiration to me ;)

Loved it Matt :)
5/5

Awwww this poem is so romantic and sweet! I loved it from the beginning until the end!

I agree with Meme, all her words describe what you've written! And I haven't written a sweet love poem like this in ages, so I miss it too!!!

Amazingggg =D

Wow..so cute, simple, beautiful, excellent piece..5+5..

I love this poem :]