I really enjoyed reading this
had to read it through a couple of times but when i did i got it haha

very emotional
wouldnt change a thing!
hang in there! and keep it up

5/5 from me

I think this piece is amazing. Excellent job,

I like it. Captures this sense of longing and desire.
I think that some parts such as "'the birds wont sing and the sun won't rise if you don't smile,' you told me" could use a little more tweaking but overall it is very well done.

P.S.
I personally think that for that statement, instead of "you told me," "or so you said" is much more befitting for this kind of poem.