Comments : Tell Me Lies

  • 13 years ago

    by kiara

    I felt so much in this beautiful :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was a stellar poem, such intensity and emotion. Anyone that has felt the sting of lies can relate. An awesome write,

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem was fully on. It was really intense and I found myself engrossed in it from start to end.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey beautiful,

    What sad (buy well written poem)
    I can relate to it deeply.

    Say you keep my texts
    And read them every night
    Inform me that I'm not perfect
    But for you I'm just right

    ^ I love this - The rhyme was perfect.

    I also love the last 2 lines. So very strong

    Well done

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love this poem! 5/5