Autumn (Haiku)

Nature is one of my favourite theme in poetry. Autumn has lovely set of words that creates colorful imagery. Short as usual of haiku form but yours is awe-inspiring and lingers in the mind for awhile. I love your style, full of sound images and classy words. I appreciate your magnificent talent. Jazakallah, cheers! :)

Much better :) Write on!

I used a syllable counter... I guess maybe not that accurate :S << awkward. I'll edit

Either i am sleeping or the syllable count is not right.. 5-7-5. An easy fix :)

Mmm, intersting. Haikus can be so cozy and enchanting. I liked this one. Imaginative and carries lots of meaning.

Go Zahra :)