Never Fall in Love

by Million Tears   Jun 23, 2004


This is possibly the worse poem i wrote so far... i dunno i think it is cause i was mad at the time and i didn't take my time on this one and i didn't put in my best work

*~@Never Fall in Love@~*

I was told love makes the world go around,
I heard it keeps your feet on the ground.
I once believed it's the purpose of life,
But now I see love's just a knife.
All love does is break your heart,
All it does is rip you apart.
You give them your love and best,
They take a knife and stab you in the chest.
They want to be with you and no one else,
All you're doing is hurting yourself.
Love turns you stupid and blind,
Later it will haunt you in your mind.
You say you hate them so much,
At nights you miss their gentle touch.
Broken trust leaves your heart so sore,
For no reason you come back for more.
All though you say ?I love you,'
You know in the end they'll never be with you.
You think your love will be so strong,
Then suddenly everything goes wrong.
There's nothing to gain,
Only the pain.
You say with them you want to age,
You don't even look on the other page.
Love is just a stupid lie.
You'll soon look back and wonder why.
You say you'll do whatever it takes,
You never make it through the heartbreaks.
They give so many tries,
Never see with their own eyes.
They say they'll catch you when you fall,
But where are they when you call?
Love is just a stupid word,
Emotions are so absurd.
They say you're the reason that they breathe,
If that is true why do they leave?
One moment it's their heart you'll never break,
Suddenly loving them was a big mistake.
You'd wish they'd disappear.
But then you shed a tear.
Hearts are broken every day,
So please listen to the words I say.
This is the way that love bends,
This is the way the story ends.
This is my advice from me to you,
There's just one problem;
I love you.

*~@Dedicated to the one I lost@~*

Please commentcxD?vote! thanks!

*~@8渀~*

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  • 20 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    So far..I've given all your poems 5.0s =)

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    amazin poem, that was really really good, and if this is what you consider bad, i can't wait to read the good ones, which i plan on doin real soon, whoever this girl is u loved/love so much, shes lucky, cos love sucks, and its hell hard to find a guy who actually means it when he says he loves you... great poem, keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Todd

    hey omg you are a great writer that wasn't a bad poem at all and trust me i kow how you feel i ahve been in your same situation before don't worry about it she doesn't deserve you. . great poem and you are a teriffic writer . . please read my poems and comment int hem it woudl really mean alot! thanks so much ashley todd

  • 20 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I'm amased. Your work is so outstanding. I know you put alot of feeling into your poems. Trust me it shows. You may think this is one of your worst, but I think it is one of the best! Keep up the oustanding work. And I hope your love sees how much you care. Stay Strong!

  • 20 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Awe, this was such a sad poem, seems like you've had your heart broken as of late. I hope you feel better soon. Btw, I thought this poem was pretty awesomely written. Keep writing, I hope you feel better soon.
    Love,

    -Blue ^_~.