by Matthew Schut Oct 1, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
The moment is right, the stars are out |
by average thoughts
What to say ..now this is wat i believe true simple poetry is. |
This is very lovely sounds very desirable and I can see myself falling into the poem as if it were me as a dream...very good I loved it :) :) 10/10 |
Aww :)) |
by BlueJay
Amazing piece. Your imagery, and memory or story go hand in hand and are written to perfection. Your voice is clear, and it really does stand out. Your word choice is great and it creates a wonderful flow. Terrific job, |