Amazing piece. Your imagery, and memory or story go hand in hand and are written to perfection. Your voice is clear, and it really does stand out. Your word choice is great and it creates a wonderful flow. Terrific job,

Aww :))
Beautiful poem!
this is an example of true love.

The emotion of happiness & love felt pours out.A flawless piece. You can image this whole scene

Amazing job
5/5

This is very lovely sounds very desirable and I can see myself falling into the poem as if it were me as a dream...very good I loved it :) :) 10/10

What to say ..now this is wat i believe true simple poetry is.
Simple, beautiful, ful of images and emotions..powerful..and u knw wat d bst part is?
No irritating vocab, jus simple words ..makin this poem..so close to evryones hrt..5/5