Dude, this was very intense with emotional overtones of complete sadness. Brilliant write, you always bring us good poetry.

Ahhh...the longings of a lover. It so tenderly written..beautiful yet sad. I can feel the yearnings behind each line.

Love, Love , LOVE your writing Randy,,, its so good to read yours again! :D ( I have missed so much by being away...) This piece will keep me coming back :) A beautiful write, which I could feel the love, romance and sadness in.

Sadness and longing for a love that you would like to recapture and go back to how it was then. You also brought nature into the mix, memories of where the love started. Well done.

Wow you write with so much emotion, no matter what it is.
Very romantic, with a smooth flow, excellent wording and lots of emotional highway.

Connie