Nice dark rhming piece :) right up my alley..spoky stuff and well done! lol take care. Redhotmess

First of all, I love the rhyming scheme.
It gave depth to the poem and made it more rhytmic.

I loved the ending. So breathtaking.

^^I agree with my Abed that the ending was breath-taking.

This was so dark and well-written, good work :)

Dark and chilling. What a great rhyme theme and the flow was smooth and easy. It had depth and intensity . Great job

Connie

Rhyme and flow couldn't be better. You gave us chills and lead us into a dark world that ended with a surprise. Excellent

Wow,,,I loved this poem a fantastic write and an amazing read,,,great job and greatly written :) 5/5

Excellent subject to write about and really well put together. Well done.