I can relate to the first stanza. Never lose hope in god and you'll fight your way to your struggles. ^.^

"Living my life as a vegetable,
facing unforseen forces,
fighting my way through the struggle
Hopes of conquests,
victories unheard yet spoken of"

Thank u everlasting

Wonderful Poem, So Sad.. I Felt Sad. You Accomplished Making The Feelings Reel.. And I Appriciated That. Im Going To Be Sitting In Class With A Tear Rolling Down My Cheek. I Actually Had To Hold It In. Keep Up The Great Work!
5/5
-Jessi.

Yet again another good write. Faultless.

5/5

You are fabulous! Heard me? Fabulous!
I LOVE this poem, so damn much, please remind me to nominate this the next week because it is a winner! Great poetry.

Flawless, I agree.

'victories unheard yet spoken of'

^

So true! I loved this line, along with the ending that speaks of so many things.

I want to congratulate you for such a creativity. :)
Bravo

Thank u very much poetess..i will try to remind u

That is a really good poem no criticism on this :)

This is AMAZING, I love evrything in the poem:) well written:) ofc a 5

This is AMAZING, I love evrything in the poem:) well written:) ofc a 5

Favorite stanza:

"Times are at hand
Anxiously wait for my rise,
now a teenager but destined to be great,
till i rise"

Loved it ^^

Your poems are really interesting and make me think about things I never really thought about before.
Keep up the good work 5/5

Loved IT <3 :D
Your Writing Is Unique .

This is an interesting piece. Yes it could be a winner, and it could be seen as amazing. However I simply see a well written piece of intruge. There are many well executed technical aspects and even more creative. Excellent job.

Wow wow and wow I can't find a favorite stanza because it's all so, so GREAT :D a fantastic peice with great meaning and a message :) it was all so wonderful and a terrific read just awesome and wow :D 5/5

Excuse my language but...I effing love this sh*t. Write more of this, less of the love stuff...for serious, dude.

Beautiful poem. :)

This well written poem conveys a strong theme from start to finish

Wonderful Poem Really Like it Great Job XX

Very good poem. love it very much.

First of all, I lliked the title of this poem, and the content of it is so meaningful and i can really tell that you just let the words flow out and it was a great piece of poetry, glad you chose that title for this type of poem... nice work :)

I really like this, enjoy the parts that rhymed quite a bit. this poem is very encouraging and inspirational.