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by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG   Oct 2, 2011


You became the snow that melts,
When the sun begins to glare,
A star who's faded into the night,
And whose light's no longer there.

The words erased from a notebook page,
Leaving only impressions behind,
So too did you disappear from sight,
With nothing but memories to remind.

Like a drop of water into the ocean,
You were swallowed by uncertainty,
Lost among the grains of sand,
That make up what we call eternity.

Everything that was once you,
Brushed away like teardrops from a face,
Gone with no one but me to mourn,
The vanishing of your every trace.

Now the task falls unto me,
To sing once more your last lament,
For no one else will ever understand,
The full extent of how much you truly meant.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The first thing that struck me was the flow, it was flawless and the wording too really fit into the deep and sadness of the poem,
    You really made me feel what I was reading, and that was because the emotion was very strong and the imagery worked really well.

    Love
    Tara
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Woow the power and emotion of this piece is mind blowin i loved the ways you used the earth with the sand and ocean. .. Then the stars. .. The rhym n wording was perfect 5/5

    tony x

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Woow the power and emotion of this piece is mind blowin i loved the ways you used the earth with the sand and ocean. .. Then the stars. .. The rhym n wording was perfect 5/5

    tony x

  • 13 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Awesom flow with too much missed missing feelings , fear of becoming just because again , on the edge of lossing faith , a pretty job has stood against the emotional storm (X

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was such a touching piece. It really spoke to me. I espically loved the first two stanza's

    Excellent

    5/5

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