Friendship might be best

by Innocent Fairy   Oct 3, 2011


Confusion settling
Unsure I am
Maybe it's fear
I can see
but do I want to see
Probably not
for I can tell you've been hurt
I can see some truth
but can I trust my thinking
when I have this gut feeling
Maybe we should be friends
until my vision unclouded
I need to think more
I want to be there for you
but I have to be sure
before I get to involved
because I can feel myself moving there
and I'm scared
I wish it to be true
But
I have this nerve
it's tugging
like a snake through my thoughts
it's unsettling
I'm sorry
Very sorry
but I feel I can't trust you
I wonder the things you say
but then you're very sweet
that I'm feeding in
but if you love me
you should tell the whole world
especially you're ex
tell me the reason why not
it might calm my nerves
but I must decide
I need to think
and what's best for me
things are unknown
I am unsure
and confusion has settled
it might be best if were friends
but if you love me then fight
fight for me
give me reasons why
friends would be best
until I know what's true
what i really feel
what I really know
until my confusion clears
so until then
it might be best to be friends

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think this poem could be a bit tigthened up, but that's not essential. I like the emotions in this poem because they're really powerful and heartfelt. The speakers descrepance definatly shines through and I like the fact that you were able to decide in the end. I like the simplicity of this poem, it's contrary to the speakers thoughts, which encouraged me to imagine what I'd do if I was in your place, but I guess I'd act just like you would. Well written poem. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love this girl.

    trusting your gut feeling by not doing more with him until you know the 100% truth. Emotion of wanting to trust him, but not being able to flows out of this poem.

    Love it girl<3
    5/5

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