I loved this it's very desirable and sweeet and true for many...a terrific read and excellent write u two did wonderful.... very nice :) :) 5/5

Well written collaborations are not only seamess, they are outstanding. This piece is just that and then some. It is simple yet interesting, and it flows.very well for coming from two different minds.

This is absolutely amazing both of you, it flowed amazingly
and it's very simple and beautiful o the eye.
the idea out of it is very common which makes it very valid.
i'm impressed.

Nycly written yet again.. N dat 2 on worldz fav subject.....

Your a good writer :)

I am an admirer of such poems..cant tel u both hw much i lvd it..
It ws smthin differnt fr girl to try ..bt fantastic job..5 ,5 ,and ooonly 5..

Awwww this poem is SOOO beautiful! What a wonderful collaboration - both your styles meshed so well, and speaking of perfect harmony, this poem did have harmony! It didn't even feel like it was written by two people... Amazing job! So proud of both of you. Love itttt <3333

An absolutely wonderful piece. It was filled with love and smooth flowing.
Not only was it well penned but a theme some can really relate too.
Excellent, you write as one .

Very touching and sweet.
You both did an amazing job.

5/5

-Heather