Arrogate Metaphors

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Oct 3, 2011


Angel hair pasta
vinaigrette dreams
lemon drop skies
where unicorns scream

Daisies are dancing
roses turn to rust
dandelions swaying
as lilies adjust

Metaphors bloom
under midnight stars
leaving the mind
riddled and charred

What are they saying?
What does it all mean?
Marshmallow clouds
and green jelly beans?

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  • 13 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I'm giggling so hard... That was pretty funny, dear.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww wow I loved this! I loved the imagery you created through your words... and I must say nice choice of food! yummy! But really nicely written, I enjoyed it very much. Well done =D

  • 13 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Nice rhyming piece..a nice little jingle

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well they have said it all so there is nothing much for me to say except for thanks for another excellent read..liked it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    Why didn't I come across this earlier?

    I can only agree with all the comments above and it was a more than enjoyable read.
    Your choice of words and how you managed to convey this message with unique and somehow entertaining metaphors is just stunning. I definately loved the fact that this poem flows smoothly and rhymes too! I haven't read this kind of poems in quite a while; poems with original rhymes, smooth flow, brilliant wording AND a great message.

    This is absolutely brilliant, no doubt.

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