by Jenni
I really enjoyed reading this poem because the emotions are really powerful and they seem heartfelt. I like your choice of words; you managed to describe the situation really sincere and the simplicity somehow underlines it very well. The fact that the speaker asks a question at the beginning of the poem and end up answering it himself makes the poem have a specific structure. The only thing I would fault is the flow as it doesn't flow completly smoothly, but it's not that bad. |
by Craig
Meh i write how i feel, if i feel sad i write a sad poem if i feel happy (rarely) then i write a happy poem. if im not thinking smoothly then my poems dont run smooth either, thankyou for the positive feedback |