This Is Beautiful! You Have Some Talent, Keep Writing Darlin.:) Once You Write More You'll Figure Out That You Can Say So Much In Less Words, Cus It Was A Little Sloppy But Overall Pretty Good! And The Ryhmes Seemed A Lil Forced, Just Try And Go With Your Heart And Not Your Head..And You'll See A Poem Dosnt Need To Ryhme To Sound amazing. But You Kinda Pulled It Off In This Poem.:) I Hope This Helped, Seen As Your Post In Disscussion Said You Were New:) But IF You Could Tell Me Whatcha Think On My Poem "Nobodys Watching".. That Would Be Great! And Im Going To Rate Some Of Your Poems As Well I Would Love If You Would Do The Same For Me(: Thanks Doll!
-jessi<3