by luminous wonder Oct 4, 2011
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
At times you may feel in distress... |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. Great message throughout this poem as-well, I loved it! 5/5 |
by Reuel Macayan
You did it again my friend...the constant mood, the erratic rhyme and rythm adds up to the impact of the emotions you are trying to tell your reader. i really love your words. |