by Matthew Schut Oct 5, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Another day of school and therapy |
Wow am I sensitive right now I think I have tears in my eyes,,, this is very dashing and hit my heart like a lighting bolt,fast and hard, like wow very good poem the emotion was definitely felt and you did terrific again, I loved this poem and sad, great read, sorry muches if it's true,,,10/10 |
Wow. The pain he feels is overwhelming. Wanting nothing more then to get the approval of his mom & getting nothing but silence. Trying so hard to prove to her hes changed & grown up into this man. |
by BlueJay
Wow... this deffinatly has story and emotion. It is crazy good but wow. It left an impression on me and it had a lot going on in it. There is story, flow, rhyme, excellent word choice, and emotion is more than abundant. Whatever inspired this I repeat wow. Anyway terrific job 5/5 |