Longing for his mother...

by Matthew Schut   Oct 5, 2011


Another day of school and therapy
Coming back to a place called "home"
He's surrounded by nine other guys
All pulled from their families, they feel alone

This is the life of a group home
Being pulled from friends and family
Placed into a house full of guys
Falling asleep at night feeling empty

But today is different, he is excited
He finally passed his therapy class
Walks in and checks the phone
His mom called, he hits redial fast

"Mom, you are going to be so proud of me
I was told today that I have an apartment
And I finally passed my therapy class"
Filled with excitement, he waits for his moms consent

But as the conversation continues
You can hear the hurt in his tone
His mother doesn't even compliment him
She totally ignores him on the phone

"Mom, why don't you love me,
I just want you to be proud of me
You are the reason why I am here
This is not how my life should be"

With tears in his eyes,
He throws the phone against the wall
"I want nothing to do with her,
And I hope she never decides to call"

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  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow am I sensitive right now I think I have tears in my eyes,,, this is very dashing and hit my heart like a lighting bolt,fast and hard, like wow very good poem the emotion was definitely felt and you did terrific again, I loved this poem and sad, great read, sorry muches if it's true,,,10/10

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow. The pain he feels is overwhelming. Wanting nothing more then to get the approval of his mom & getting nothing but silence. Trying so hard to prove to her hes changed & grown up into this man.

    Needing her in his life, to know that hes okay now, wanting her to be proud. I love this poem. The emotion is outstanding, it flows perfectly drawing you in wanting to make read more.

    Great Job, But they always are :)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow... this deffinatly has story and emotion. It is crazy good but wow. It left an impression on me and it had a lot going on in it. There is story, flow, rhyme, excellent word choice, and emotion is more than abundant. Whatever inspired this I repeat wow. Anyway terrific job 5/5