I fall in love with this poem. This is the sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetest thing you ever wrote.

I know I will never be perfect for you
Because you deserve the very best...
^^
YOU ARE THE VERY BEST !! LOL

This is a definite 100/100
SMILE :D

This piece is amazing, as always from you, or so it seems. Excellent emotion, the flow is nice, the rhyme scheme is pretty good, and the thought is present the whole way through. Great job.

Matt(:
Another amazing poem!

I pull out a gun and shoot
There cupid lies so lifeless
I know I will never be perfect for you
Because you deserve the very best...
-My favorite part... Pulling the trigger because she deserves the best, thinking you aren't that. When you are.

This made you keep wanting to read.The love you feel for her shines through. When you mentioned cupid you made us think that he would make her fall in love. Except you twisted it around :).

I don't want to ruin this friendship
I wish I was the perfect guy
Unfortunately I will never be the one
A tear slowly rolls down from my eye...
-You can see the tear slowly rolling down your face, the pain you feel knowing you won't be the desire of her dreams.

Amazing poem(:
5/5

Wow,matt..u and ur poetry jus marvelous..i mean d beauty abt ur poems is dt u tuk d simple ordinary words and make them priceless..
No sign of dat frustrating vocablry shit..
Thanks to u for writing sch beautiful poems...
Bt i hv a req ,plz ,plz ,plz make ur poems titles as strng n beautiful as ur poems..
I wish i cud gv more,bt jus 5 to gv..
Keep on writing..

Totally get this poem. If this is really happening with you i know how you feel

I don't even know if you know it
But you are the one that I desire
With your simple, beautiful ways
My heart is set on fire
~ this is my favorite stanza but I absolutely love love loved this poem it was an amazing read :) :) though if this was true I would say the girl deserves the choice because deep down she may feel the same,I'd say take the risk cuz if she don't feel the same u should be able to move on as great friends,,,anyways I loved the poem it was outstanding :) :) 5/5

Wow!! Matt this poem was SOOO SWEEET and touchinggg, but sadddd! I loved all your sweet descriptions, but when Cupid was shot, it kind of made me sad! But the fact that you 'did' that because you felt like you weren't perfect enough for this person... it disappointed me a little! (not the poem - but the idea)
I don't think the idea of not being deserving of someone, is nice to think of. if that makes sense? But I know it's just a poem!!

But really great job with this! I love your poetry =)

Okay... I know it isn't right... Or normal apparently... But I was laughing hard when you wrote you shot cupid... Diaper wearing arrow creeper got what he deserved... ANYWAY...

Back to the truly beautiful poem at hand... That was so sweet and sincere. Each line had this radiant flow that kept me desiring more. Then, when I got to your twist it was a huge shocker, but somehow so fitting with the ending you wrote.

5/5 like always, cupcake! ^^

- Shining Star