by Salina Is Beautiful Oct 5, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I cant help but notice you fading away |
I love this. I can relate to it. Wonderful job. |
by Liliana
The rhymes of this are really good :) |
First thing I'm going to say is this isn't going to be a one line comment telling you how good the poem is. I don't mean to offend, just give constructive critism to improve your writing, that being said you can choose whether to continue reading the comment or not. |
by Boy
Its very dark and sad poem full of emotions.... good work |
No its not |