I liked, and disliked your poem, which I feel needs explaining. I disliked it because of the idea that leaving someone is the best way to protect them. In truth it is usually an excuse, or running away. That's simply a personal observation, not necessarily saying that is what you're doing though. I don't usually read poetry that doesn't have some sort of rhyme scheme or form simply because it isn't often done well. I think what drew me to your poem however, was a more personal reason. It reminds me of someone and the poem is written in a similar fashion. As for your poem and writing specifically I think you did a very good job on where you chose to break the lines of the poem up. Often times people cut a line in awkward places which doesn't allow it to flow smoothly from one thought to the next. I thought you did very well at that and connecting the lines of the poem together to create a whole as well as staying on one idea. It was short, but I thought it was a good write. You ended it well even if I don't personally like the ending if that makes any sense.

Ok thx

This is a good poem

Thankyou