Comments : Hidden

  • 13 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A very nice composition. Filled with pain.

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I love the concept of "stand up tall on her own two feet", "smile that hides tears".
    Wonderful thoughts, which shows character and resilience. I am here to support people who have a will to "stand tall" though they may have taken a "hard fall". 5*****

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    "Shadowing the scar that conseals the stain. "
    This line is very interesting, makes for curious imagery.
    I loved your poem. :)
    Keep your chin up and stay strong.
    5/5