Aww... this is amazing, but sad is oh so true. Emotion and story are nailed, thats for sure. There is a flow and the word choice being so simple is to thank for that flow. The rhyme scheme is awesome, because it doesn't feel forced, yet the story and meanings are still clear. Overall I think this piece is amazing.

Wow this lies heavy on my heart very sad and I kinda relate only with the school part with bully's I relate only a little for my story is different but if felt I was living there again and the pain was there if felt you were describing exactly what I felt back then A terrific read and outstanding job 20/20

Aww this is so sad
i cried
but i really like this poem :]

..... so preventable.... wish people were more unconditional with there affections than being self centered with it :(

..... so preventable.... wish people were more unconditional with there affections than being self centered with it :(

..... so preventable.... wish people were more unconditional with there affections than being self centered with it :(

Sad it touching

Loved it 5/5

You get up with pain in your heart
And storm out of the lunch room door
Heading straight to the bathroom stall
And scream, "I can't take this anymore

i really like this line...the rhyme is vry good and good flow...great!

I liked this poem a lot. Thank you for writing it.
It is lovely..