Comments : Mistress of the Moon

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    One Word: O MY F'in GOD!

    Surely nominated on monday.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Such a great poem for a talented girl. Your words were like musical notes playing the sweetest song. Excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by Saerelune

    I guess if you'd rib off my face/skin you'd find all that you've described here. =p

    "perhaps a poet
    with a slighty
    heavier heart"
    ^My favourite part, so simple but so true.

    I love you. :)

    <3

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    A white skinned goddess
    of melancholia
    perhaps a poet
    with a slighty
    heavier heart

    that was the most beautiful write ... no wonder you are loved by all your poerty is enchanting ... and you decribed mera perfectly 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow partner, you totally nailed it, I mean what could be more beautiful than a poem tribute to a close friend, in description that is so profound. I love how you describe 'kohl-rimmed eyes' and how you used the word 'melancholia' totally mesmerizing. A well deserved win. Congrats partner:)

  • 13 years ago

    by LivHelen Kernan

    Very very beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by LivHelen Kernan

    Very very beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey there. I don't know you, but you deacribed me so perfectly. Beautiful peice of writing. Amazing adjectives. A++ in my mind

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I can see why this poem won the contest. It was excellently put. I have no critique to offer as this was perfect

    5/5