by Decayed
One Word: O MY F'in GOD! |
Such a great poem for a talented girl. Your words were like musical notes playing the sweetest song. Excellent |
by Saerelune
I guess if you'd rib off my face/skin you'd find all that you've described here. =p |
A white skinned goddess |
by Faithless
Wow partner, you totally nailed it, I mean what could be more beautiful than a poem tribute to a close friend, in description that is so profound. I love how you describe 'kohl-rimmed eyes' and how you used the word 'melancholia' totally mesmerizing. A well deserved win. Congrats partner:) |
Very very beautiful! |
Very very beautiful! |
by Lauren
Hey there. I don't know you, but you deacribed me so perfectly. Beautiful peice of writing. Amazing adjectives. A++ in my mind |
I can see why this poem won the contest. It was excellently put. I have no critique to offer as this was perfect |