Im no fool

by shameka love   Oct 7, 2011


You told me you love me,, and i believed you..
If u really loved me u wouldn't have hurt me so deeply..

when i saw you with her i just wanted to cry, because i knew she was your X and soon i felt i would become that too...
you told me you love me,, and u broke my heart you lied to me cheated on me and let your friends tear us apart .. i once thaught what we had was special but you just took me for a fool..

I pretended i was happy because i really loved you,, and i wanted everything to work.. i had faith in our relationship and i gave you my all.. but if i only knew you would have took me a fool...

I'm tired of crying and tired of wishing and hoping you would come back.. I guess thats just the way things should be... I hope you find that perfect girl and i hope i find that perfect boy.. I'm no fool I'm moving on without you :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Well done for moving on,
    This is your best of the 4 you have posted so far.
    Just two nits (guest should be guess, taught should be thought)

    If I was to make any suggestions you could thin it down slightly, you have the emotion right in this, some of the words could be dropped with out losing the overall meaning and feel.

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