I guess the message here was really intriguing. :) Simple poetry yet shows so much, and I love this kind of poems, very well-written! :D I, however, would want to suggest something, I disliked the title, not really interesting or... y'know, eye-catching, you should pick something with ...Hmmm I don't know, short titles are what I like the most but it is now up to you, haha. :)

I repeat, good poetry. :)

Simplicity has it's advantages in getting the message across, sometimes the best writes I have found we written from the heart.

This is a very good write.