I really do hope and wish that your dream will
come true Randy. You have penned vivid images of how your band looks..liked it.

It is amazing how a dream can stand out from all the rest and we can remember them, seems like forever. Nice.

We all have dreams that we want to remember but you penned this with so much realism. Music and poetry do go hand in hand and it's easy to see you've got the talent.
Good stuff bro

This is really a nice poem. I like the flow and wording. Nice as always

Connie

I really like this.
It spoke of real things. It's annoying to see a broken band.

And you expressed that in a flawless, rhythmic way with amazing rhyming scheme, flow, depth yet simple wording.

You are so dreamy, Randy.So dreamy.