This is sweet, and quite simple. you did a great job with the imagery, as well as emotional description. I think how you.ended the piece was a very nice contrast.to how a lot of poems commonly end. Your pen, and you, are a magnificent team, because you never cease to amaze with your talent. Anyway, terrific job.

Wow amazing once again I love ur poems keep up the great work for u are super talented :) :) fantastic reads all the time I loved it :) :) 5/5

Awww Matt... this poem is sweet yet made me feel sad at the end! But you have a way of telling a story in a poem, which makes it so engaging for me as the reader. Great job my friend =D