Comments : You Have Become My Dream

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow... This poem is,,,AMAZING and greatly done just outstanding I loved it and loved reading this great fantastic poem :) :) I have no favorite stanza because the entire thing was,,, lovely and I read this feeling it to be my own very well done :) :) 10/10

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    I absolutely love this!
    sweet emotions pouring out
    and it shows how much you love that person
    every stanza was perfectly written..
    loved it! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really enjoyed reading this poem because it's filled with pure and honest emotions, which make the message really powerful. You had me captivated and interested throughout the poem and I actually liked the rhymes. I have to admit that the flow is a bit choppy at some places, but it is not too bad. Overall you penned a heartfelt poem.