Absolutely love how you described each scene.
love the word selection
full of sadness
awww..it brought tears to my eyes.
really touching poem.
AWESOME once again!
10000/1000 :)

Wow, I loved the description in this !!
It flowed really well and your word choice is great :)) one again brilliant 5/5 !

Wow, I loved the description in this !!
It flowed really well and your word choice is great :)) one again brilliant 5/5 !