Wow,,,amazing,,,i loved it and eveything was gread and it was a terrific read,,,very awesome, though i had no favorite part cuz altogether it was great :) :) 5/5

Got me tearing, it just hit my straight into my heart, and opened up some closed doors. It is indeed hard, so hard not being able to say goodbye, and its even harder to face the facts that surrounds you.

The way you write is so sincere, breath-taking, and deep. Keep on writing like this, I simply love it.

I forgot, a 5/5 and straight nomination.

When I read songs it is soooo hard for me to imagine them being sung without music being played and all, they are just words on the screen- but not this one, Its like I could hear it all. It was the first time it has happened to me like this, reading. Absolutely fabulous. And when I was done I thought "God that WAS good!"

I love love love this(:<3

Amazing poem. The love you feel pours out, not able to say goodbye & wondering who will be your superhero :). It flowed beautifully & kept making you want to read it.

An amazing job, one of my favorite poems I've read :)
5/5

This must be one of the sweetest, creative, heartfelt and most amazing poems under love section!! for a good while..

i love it, and enjoyed reading every single line of it, well done, this will be nominated by the club on Tuesday. chosen XD

5/5

Amazing piece Joe.
So you write songs also? :)

Wow- impressive.

This is terrific.The flow is outstanding, which is helpful if you wish to deem it worthy of being a song. Your word choice, emotion, and story are excellent and also very helpful to call a piece a song. Wow, I can't get over how well written this is. Amazing job. I also gave this a 5/5

A poem with soul, emotions, and meaning. Wording was stellar, flow easy and light. You did an excellent job on this...masterpiece for sure

Connie

True art has no words to describe its level of "wow-factor."
Just another one of those moments.

This is amazing I love it:)

This is beyond good man.
I'd really Love to see you post more often.
nomination and God bless.

I FEEL LIKE I'm GONNA SING THIS!!!
XD

Wonderfully written, within this oem there are so many great lines I could just pick one. Great poem

If you scroll up, yes up up there you can see that I've already commented, so do not think I am disturbing but I need to try this haha....

Edit:

you rock my world joey, thanks for the news lol

Wow, it's been a long time since I've read anything that you've wrote... A very long time in fact. I can definitely see the improvement and the change of writing style in some ways. Amazing piece of writing; very heartfelt.

5/5

-Heather