WoW this is really weird, and diffrent. But I love it, its the first time for me to read such a poem:) a 5 from me. And I guess ur really diffrent=)

I gave this one much thought. Instead of running away, I chose for my character to give in. Not sure if anyone noticed, but I tried to include the 5 stages of death. Dark indeed :3

I noticed your 5 stages whilst reading..
a very well thought through poem which i enjoyed reading!

your rhyming scheme kept a good flow
i loved your use of couplets

all and all an amazing read
5/5 from me