Wow, I love the questions... it got me thinking about my life and I guess helped me realized the important things that I do believe in! Good work my friend! So simple yet so much power behind the questions! |
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by BlueJay
I really like this piece. It is creative and simple. I especially like the end, because a lot of people would fight that, would say that the majority of the world says that, but in truth no one of importance does. The flow is extraordinary. Correction to my first statement, I LOVE this piece. Amazing job |
by Tara Kay
The title was simple and effective, though I question if it was too obvious, too simple? |
Yet again you have a good here :D |
This poem is excellent! i haven't read a poem like this in along time, you have a way with words! 5/5 ^.^ |