Usually I Wouldnt Choose A Poem From The PAst As 2nd Place Win For A Contest! But This Was Really Good, And Deserved IT! Awesome!:)

Thank you for rating and commenting on my poem :) i appreciate it a lot !

I really like in the beginning how you mentioned you are the creator of the puzzle... I've never quite heard that before and it definitely portrays that unknown, uncertainty that seems to be in every aspect of your life. I feel like you chose your words with care so that each one is profound and contributes to the reality that you still have this inspiration to write, even if the words are not always clearly cut out.....I was not expecting this "fading is existing", but it really got me thinking in a different perspective.....especially with mentioning you are possibly the sun setting or the moon losing its luster, like all of us may at one time be forgotten about or our actions overlooked, but we still have presence. Only suggestion would be to change your 'maybe' to 'may be' just so the reader can see that difference since its acting as a verb. Wonderful thoughtful write, second-hand for sharing and welcome to M&M as well! =)

Wow wow wow, I love it sooooo much, outstanding poem, it spoke out to me soooo much, wonderful poem, every verse was another one that got to my heart, this poem is so deep and dark and meaningful! Two thumbs up