by Salina Is Beautiful Oct 10, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It started out well |
I liked it although you could use some fillers to make it more appealing, still, i liked it. |
by jAsZmIn
Still have no idea bout love,, and broken relationship... yet,, I find this poem quite good.. well done :) |
by Georgia
Good poem, i like it x |
by Bobby
I really related to this, between the lines of how sad the risk can be when I chance my heart on someone. thank you for sharing 5/5 |
by Paul Gondwe
This is brilliant..i was actually feelin ur pain in this poem..i could see a girl crying..i loved it from the begining up to the end.this is exactly what am going through....5/5 |