Sunrise.

by Courageous Dreamer   Oct 10, 2011


A morning burst
of orange citrus
upon skin,
awakens the sun
from reverie.

Written for Abby's marathon.
Prompt: 21 syllables.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Intense and cute.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Loved it, but now I want more. T'was a tease, for the first 2 lines drew me right in, quite descriptive, I've got vivid images of "orange citrus" dancing in my head!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    The most descriptive 21 syllables written lol! i love the image, this is more like a piece of art..
    loved the title, the sun makes me happy as long as it doesnt shine so sharply :P

    Well done

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