The most descriptive 21 syllables written lol! i love the image, this is more like a piece of art..
loved the title, the sun makes me happy as long as it doesnt shine so sharply :P

Well done

Loved it, but now I want more. T'was a tease, for the first 2 lines drew me right in, quite descriptive, I've got vivid images of "orange citrus" dancing in my head!

Intense and cute.