I really love the words and rhymes of this poem 5/5

A well penned poem and one that grabs the reader with full emotional value.
I would edit the strange characters out of this. A small distraction from a good write.

Wow... The format was different than a lot of poems but somehow fitting for the essence of this poem. Definitely hit a darker side of sadness.

5/5
-Heather

Well written,maintained the flow throughout and the rhyme is also good.Addressed simple,but to the point.
Appreciated !

I loved how each line grabbed my attention and made me want to read on. You have a really good poem here and I feel you have talent. I look forward to reading more of your work.

5/5

Oh ...Iliked that ...nice poem
keep up ...5/5 :)