by Sylvia
Memories of a past love can steal the things we enjoy in life. The smallest things can trigger that feeling. Nice job on this. |
You know...this might have been a vent as stated in the title but I felt rage reading it, I felt hurt and sadness . To stir that emotion into another is talent. |
Excellent Bro. I think I'll just say ditto to what the ladies said. It might have started as a vent but it turned out to be a good poem. |
by Love Panda
Epic.. Truely amazing. I am in awe. |
by Exostosis
Anger?. .not precisely. More of a regret I must say. She has left, the author is heart broken, and still her memories deprive him tranquility. Thus he keeps himself busy to avoid recalling past moments. And the day time noise does not let him have silence, for silence is soothing yet painful. He has a soft corner for her. |
WOW i haven't read a poem this good in a long time. well done 5/5 |