Words upon Words

by E Dacaf   Oct 11, 2011


For even the most honeyed words, from gaping jaws;
will not compare you to a summers day.
You are no day, or night. Nor a fruit in in my eye,
or a scent of gilded lilies.
You are...you.
Woman of heat, life and smiles.
Of delicate teeth and crystal class.
Mahogany hair cascading down slender neck of Ivory.
Eyes like stars, in oceanic waters.
Fire-Passion-Warmth, flickering your insides.
Pangs! of sadness in a crushed soul.
You.

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  • 13 years ago

    by aminath

    I liked the descriptions that you have used here. Beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Pamela

    :') so amazingly wonderous and full of beauty. Real love, you just loved her, not her features but her.

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Great choice of words..flawless

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nothing cliche about this poem, awesome bro. It feels more down to earth than most love poems. Cool write

  • 13 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Beautiful write! I like how you start of telling us what (she) is Not, and finish with images that show us what she is. Worth the read, for sure. :)

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