by Lostlove1
Beautiful write! I like how you start of telling us what (she) is Not, and finish with images that show us what she is. Worth the read, for sure. :) |
Nothing cliche about this poem, awesome bro. It feels more down to earth than most love poems. Cool write |
by Paul Gondwe
Great choice of words..flawless |
by Pamela
:') so amazingly wonderous and full of beauty. Real love, you just loved her, not her features but her. |
by aminath
I liked the descriptions that you have used here. Beautiful! |