You have done a great job in the club contest, I liked your piece. Between all the 'abnormal' poems, yours was the simpliest, deepest and with the best flow. Good work, lovely lady.

Yep, I think you did a lovely job with this one Jenna!
You really did a fantastic piece here, and eagerly await the results on the 28th!! Or 29th?

Love
Tara
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Wow I just absolutely loved this poem a great fantastic write,,,excellent job very well done just amazing :) :) 5/5

You really did a good job here Im sure you are going to have an awesome place in the contest, good luck

I really enjoyed reading this poem, not only because of it flowing so smoothly, but also because of the message your words convey. I really like the repetition of the first line because it gives this poem even more structure and I like that it changed in the last stanza because with the last stanza the whole tone of the poem changed. Well done!

Bella,
What a wonderful poem,
Heartbreaking though!

The flow of the poem is natural

You want to leave me blinded
To be confused inside my soul
You want to rob me of my core
And all that makes me whole
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I love the last part - rob me of my core - so vivid!

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I love the subtle rhyme in this piece, that gives a smooth flow while reading. As usual, the repetition is stunning. Keep it up!

I Really Enjoyed This Poem!
Nobodys Normal!!!:)
Thats What Makes Us Unique!:)
5/5

A rhyming scheme. Must agree with everyone, it is a wonderful piece. Simple but delightful, and the repetition is integrated very well. Once again the flow is exceptional.