Comments : Unbreakable Wall

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Awww this poem is sooo sad i wanna cry,,,it talks of truth and very relateable for i fear i to can relate,,,how u thought u had the fairy tale but the big bad wolf pops from hiding reveling the truth and the dream over and smack down to reality,,,a great poem yet once again fantastic,,,I hope our fairy tales come true girl 10/10

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Aww this is a heart touching poem!
    I love how you captured the reader..
    every stanza shows how heart broken she is..and how she's scared to love again.
    awesome as always
    1000/1000 :))