So many variables in this poem, very creative and original. The end was the ribbon that tied it all together. I found it very enjoyable

This was so gorgeous, and perfectly encompassed what a dream really depicts: beautiful tales, mixed with confusing oppositions, and ultimately a setting that is outwith the control of the person dreaming.

I loved the descriptions: "hourglass of life", "burning pink and orange sunset", "powdered snow".

A really vivid piece; I also love how it started off with some of the most beautiful of settings, yet ended up being a "nightmare", or feeling like one anyway.