Comments : Why?

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I could feel the heartbreak the sadness in the write.... well penned

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Laying beneath a blanket of stars,
    Gazing curiously into the night,
    The full moon, my only company,
    As I am contemplating, why?

    this was my fav ... it show us a beautiful setting with a twist of heartbreak as im sure the beauty of the moon is no match for your beloved ... keep writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I loved this , it tore at the heart and gave one cause to think.
    Sometimes we try so hard to make something work that we lose it. Or we are too easy going , what is the right way to handle a relationship.. wrong or right we chug on.
    You wrote this with perfection. Good job sweet friend

    Connie

  • Since I wrote this poem, I actually have gotten a response.... I was told that once I have made peace with being alone and accept that I will be fine either way. I will be taken care of.... Sounds like an answer the God would give since we are here for his amusement. :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Joy Helberg

    So lovely...^o^

  • 12 years ago

    by Cathie

    Im glad you Got your reply! Im at this stage now so im really feeling it... I liked the flow of it too, it was easy to read! Really good job!

    • Thank you for your comment on my poem named "why?" but you commented the same thing 7 times... computer burp? :D Just curious, are things any better on your end now? Have you gotten a reply at all yet? just thought I'd reach out, but if you feel weird talking then I'm cool just going back into the nothing of cyberspace. BTW, I hardly log into this place and my e-mail is papachopchop@gmail.com, I check it almost daily. Gotta run, peace out.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cathie

    Im glad you Got your reply! Im at this stage now so im really feeling it... I liked the flow of it too, it was easy to read! Really good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cathie

    Im glad you Got your reply! Im at this stage now so im really feeling it... I liked the flow of it too, it was easy to read! Really good job!