by E Dacaf
Kinda like a dark love in a grey place. Very nice. Reminds me of Sally and Jack from Nightmare Before Christmas. |
by L
I like it. Specially how it rhymed. |
by No1ButMe
This is very good; although the ending lost me a little bit because of the line 'You can leave if you want.' My favorite was 'In this world, I am finally found. You can leave if you want, but you see I am bound.' It was just so strong. I often feel I am bound to darkness as well so it really spoke to me. But I loved this piece. 5/5 |