Full of emotion great job i can feel what you were feeling when u wrote this... 5/5

This is amazing, well written:)5/5 I think ur gonna be my fav list:)

Hey amreen! thats a beautiful poem.. i liked it ! thanks for asking me to read it ! :)

I love this. Very great.

Nice. Lovely words for a sad poem, makes it enjoyable to read. You did a very good job in making this an interesting poem, my friend. Nice. :D

How gloomy and sad! Sometimes we just need to break free from our dark prison and fly away into the sun..I know I do, and to get there we must first let go of the darkness inside ourselves and inside our minds too. Great sad poem- worth the read
And its like you are reading my mind. Enjoy your day. Lostlove1

My heart wants to sing the melodies of nightingale,
my soul wishes to embrace the freshness of roses,
my smile wishes to be consume the hardworking nature possesed by bees
and settle happiness on dull and sad faces...

^ my favourite stanza, so soft in nature,
almost perfect but for: Nightingale should be capital N
and
3rd line remove the word 'be'

This was full of great imagery and expression.
I loved the whole thing. it was soooo sad.

Love
Tara
xx

No doubt y u won..cngrts..and as abt ratin ..def 5,5,5..

My heart wants to sing the melodies of nightingale,
my soul wishes to embrace the freshness of roses,
my smile wishes to be consume the hardworking nature possessed by bees,
and settle happiness on dull and sad faces...

my favorite, congratulations great job :)

This poem is a job well done! I can find no faults.

5/5

I agree with my Connie 'Lostlove1' that this was such a gloomy write, I honestly have no time to leave a long detailed comment for the time being but I just wanted to say this piece intrigued me, and I am really in awe. I'll come back to this later as soon as possible, sweetheart, you are such an Indian smart walking perfection.

The title is intriguing, I didn't expect the poem to be about freedom. I like how you described freedom as an obsession and how having it is all a person thinks about. Your words are also wonderful, and it flows nicely.

This is an incredible poem! 5/5!

I like all the big words used in this one. But try making the prasing closer together. I felt awkward with a short line out of no where. Only my opinion, I still liked it. (:

Excellent, you have a gift of words. I like that your poems expresses emotions that many try to conceal and this takes courage..EP

This was a beautiful poem, the flow was sensational! i loved your wording, and the emotion that emits from this. well done 5/5

I thought that it was an ok poem. I thought that it could have been a little better but it wasn't a bad poem. The wording was ok and the flow was a little off to me.
So I gave it a 4/5

This Poem, To Me, Is Defenitally A 5/5. If It Was Possible It would Be Worth More Than Even That.
Your Wording Is Sensational And I Thought Your Flow Was Spot On.
Incredible Poem! .. :)
God Bless.
Jessi

This poem is fine, I like it. I also notice that you use stanzas and they were organize o(^.^o) ( cheering expression lol) this made happy. I enjoyed more the poem.

Great and though provoking piece. Each stanza gives an interesting story. I loved the four-line style you used. Awesome